Thursday, April 19, 2012

Rolling Mist

Is it rolling in,
or moving out?
Is the darkness creeping in,
or the light pushing out?


  1. You asked for it, you got it! Still briefly unfortunately, but I hope it helps!

    Firstly, it really is good. It has a nice soft feel, almost a glow, which you want in a bridal image. The pencil work is decent and the face is well drawn.

    For constructive crits, I would prefer to see the reference before going too deep here, but here are some of the small things I can see that could use some tweaks, so to speak.

    Over-all, it may be a touch too soft. That could be a preference thing though as I like definition.

    The anatomy seems a bit wonky in the shoulders, but I cannot say for sure without the reference. I guess, she seems a bit broad considering the size of her head.

    The only other thing I can suggest is maybe this needs a background of some kind... I hate drawing them too though, so I am not one to talk there. ;-)

    Hope this is helpful my friend. Cannot wait to see more!

    1. thank you! really appreciate it. i was stuck a bit stuck on the background. i tried a thing or two, but...nothing was right. think i just wanted to be "done". :)